My Webcomic (soon to be)

Ok here are the first 5 quick draw ups of the comic...
http://www.asesino.org/comic/scanned/2004-12-30/comic0001.JPG
http://www.asesino.org/comic/scanned/2004-12-30/comic0002.JPG
http://www.asesino.org/comic/scanned/2004-12-30/comic0003.JPG
http://www.asesino.org/comic/scanned/2004-12-30/comic0004.jpg
http://www.asesino.org/comic/scanned/2004-12-30/comic0005.jpg

Ok this is where im thinking of going off of those... and sry my hand writing is soooo bad.

Ok so they go to the uncles mansion and the one that got hit in the head with the brick becomes evil and crazy, he gets a ton of crazy gamers to form a terrorist gaming clan and he is fighting for more games on linux. the other 2 characters in the first 5 comics are just kinda stuck with the people and go on the terrorisy missions too and is kinda like a pinky and the brain kinda continuation i think. I want it to be funny and actually read by people so if u think it needs improvent or is stupid or is crazy enough to work, tell me.

I'd like to see a finished version of your comic, cleaned up and all. It could be good, but I won't know till then.

fs

Now, I know you've been working on this for a long time, but Pinky and the Brain?

That just brings back some good memories there.

I like your comic and like the idea, I would like to see the finished when it comes

unforturantely i am terribly lazy and am now plaing WoW so i dont think its going to happen.. and if it is i want to find a really good idea before i commit to a terrible one